It happened when I
was 19, I was in my first week at my English four class. The teacher was the
same as in English three. I remember that
I sat with Silvia but when the teacher told us the activity I had to move
around. I had met some of my classmates
before but not all of them.
My partner was a pretty girl, Viridiana. She was
new in the faculty because she revalidated her subjects. I remember her face
highly, she was terrified. When I saw
her, I remembered me in English three. My feelings were the same, I felt
scared, I wanted scream but I didn’t do it.
Viridiana didn´t want
to speak, I had to start. At the beginning she was so shy but I told her that was
not a big deal. I spoke about my family, my dreams and some of my background,
some of my words were uncommon to her but I tried to explain her each one of them.
She spoke just a
little, I remember. Viridiana had a boyfriend but she didn’t mention his name,
she came from a town near to Puebla but it was in another city. She had two siblings,
they were younger than her. She used to dream with travel, learn German and be
a good teacher. Her father worked in a farm and her mom was a housewife,
Viridiana didn’t mention details.
Then the teacher told
us we had to change our partners. My second mate was a girl, Edith. Her full
name was Blanca Edith but she just preferred the first. Edith started to tell
me about Abigail. When I heard that name speedily remember her face. We were in
the same English class at the beginning of the career.
Edith told me that
Abi really loved animals; she used to want study Veterinary. She lived with her
family and she was from Puebla too. She didn’t eat meat because she wanted take
care about animals. Abigail was excited to be a teacher and travel a lot. I
noticed Edith had a good level. I really miss my ex mates. Was a good time with
them, they taught me a lot of things.
Hi Mayra well in my opinion you did a great job on your text, the only thing that i didnt understand was in the part where you rote: was a good time with them.
ResponderEliminarbeside that i think its perfect :)
You can also say " I told her about my family …"
ResponderEliminarCongratulations =) !!
mayra :D
ResponderEliminaryour text is reaaally good but i found some details.
I THINK is better to use i was scared
in the third paragraph a subject is missing ... I told her that IT was not a big deal.
in many cases your text needs periods
check the spelling of preferred
the TO is missing she used to want TO study Veterinary.